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PersianArt says

hello after create 9 time rejection and change 3 time, overall design, I cant send any theme to this site, now I need help to improve my theme, if you can help me, did not hesitate for this,

please see my style selector on right side. also i want your ideas about my first or second “custom change” as an main style

http://themes.massoudjoveini.com/unique/

sincerely thanks

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NCheng says

Hi,

I’m not the best to reply, but I think you should polish your typography and vertical space. And I think contrary to the name it’s not Unique in ThemeForest.

Keep it doing and good luck.

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Pirenko says

This is always kind of a personal view that doesn’t mean it’s the right path to get it approved.
- Anyway I recommend you to change some fonts. Also I think I saw at least 4 types of fonts and I think you should not use more than 3;
- The shadows on text are too strong;
- The arrow shapes appear on too many places and on some they only make things more confusing;
- The rounded icons below the slider look bad (not the icons themselves, but the whole rounded drawing);
Never give up PersianArt! :)

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PersianArt says

I apologize for my bad English language.

@NCheng
thank you for reply, if you could tell me a more detail, it was more helpful.

@Pirenko
- thank you for reply, there are 3 font, arial fro body, lora for heading (italic for portfolio) and oswald for menu.
- all shadow are strong? or portfolio and copyright that have dark background?
- about arrow, I don’t know what I must say, I use some of them for uniqueness. for ex. forms, portfolio…. but I think about again.
- I have 3 service, I thought this type better than first type that you can see at this page. I had previously used this type.

Thank you again for taking the time,
good luck

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sheko_elanteko says

In the home page …
1- you should add a hover to the top left links.
2- the animation effect on the social icons should be much faster.
3- the circles in the body beneath the slider does not look good.
4- the pattern in the body is not attractive at all.
5- like what these guys said, the fonts needs more work.

And as you know, this is my personal opinion.

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PersianArt says

@sheko_elanteko

thank you for reply,
I consider your opinion
- in my style selector are some pattern that I think some of them can match with some color. it was good if I could know your suggestion about best pattern as an general.
- It seem this type of service to be unpopular :(
- I think about font.

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dmsumon says

hello after create 9 time rejection and change 3 time, overall design, I cant send any theme to this site, now I need help to improve my theme, if you can help me, did not hesitate for this,

please see my style selector on right side. also i want your ideas about my first or second “custom change” as an main style

http://themes.massoudjoveini.com/unique/

sincerely thanks
Your design is really great , if you make some improvements then there is no reason to be rejected again. Actually I think the design quality fits the standard of Themeforest. You used too many fonts family in the design. Don’t use more than three font-family on a single page. The title and the description in the slider needs some improvements too. Make them standout. There are too much of spacing …. Just lower them. That’s all. After making the changes again submit the link of the improved version. Then authors may suggest you if it is ready to upload. Thank you
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VenzaStudio says
Hi, The over all is good but i think it need to be more simple, just easy changes : - remove shadow from text. - change logo name. - improve search part. - remove radius from sub menu on hover. - make text something near to arial or tahmoa specially titles. - Add some simple effects and this site may help you : http://tympanus.net/codrops/ - icons between circles must be changed and best to be soo simple.

Never give up

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PersianArt says

@dmsumon
thanks for reply, you gave me hope.
- really I use 3 font, arial for body, lora for heading (italic for portfolio) and oswald for menu.

@ASteam
thanks for reply, I consider your suggestions.

thank to all,
I try for Improvement and consider your opinion, I hope this theme approve.

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Pirenko says

- all shadow are strong? or portfolio and copyright that have dark background?
In my opinion yes. Too dark and with too much opacity.
I also think that on most themes “less is more”... And you should start by cleaning up some of the elements you have there.
Good luck :nerdy:
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