9 time rejection, need help

hello after create 9 time rejection and change 3 time, overall design, I cant send any theme to this site, now I need help to improve my theme, if you can help me, did not hesitate for this,

please see my style selector on right side. also i want your ideas about my first or second “custom change” as an main style

http://themes.massoudjoveini.com/unique/

sincerely thanks

Hi,

I’m not the best to reply, but I think you should polish your typography and vertical space. And I think contrary to the name it’s not Unique in ThemeForest.

Keep it doing and good luck.

This is always kind of a personal view that doesn’t mean it’s the right path to get it approved.
- Anyway I recommend you to change some fonts. Also I think I saw at least 4 types of fonts and I think you should not use more than 3;
- The shadows on text are too strong;
- The arrow shapes appear on too many places and on some they only make things more confusing;
- The rounded icons below the slider look bad (not the icons themselves, but the whole rounded drawing);
Never give up PersianArt!

I apologize for my bad English language.

@NCheng
thank you for reply, if you could tell me a more detail, it was more helpful.

@Pirenko
- thank you for reply, there are 3 font, arial fro body, lora for heading (italic for portfolio) and oswald for menu.
- all shadow are strong? or portfolio and copyright that have dark background?
- about arrow, I don’t know what I must say, I use some of them for uniqueness. for ex. forms, portfolio…. but I think about again.
- I have 3 service, I thought this type better than first type that you can see at this page. I had previously used this type.

Thank you again for taking the time,
good luck

In the home page …
1- you should add a hover to the top left links.
2- the animation effect on the social icons should be much faster.
3- the circles in the body beneath the slider does not look good.
4- the pattern in the body is not attractive at all.
5- like what these guys said, the fonts needs more work.

And as you know, this is my personal opinion.

@sheko_elanteko

thank you for reply,
I consider your opinion
- in my style selector are some pattern that I think some of them can match with some color. it was good if I could know your suggestion about best pattern as an general.
- It seem this type of service to be unpopular
- I think about font.

PersianArt said
hello after create 9 time rejection and change 3 time, overall design, I cant send any theme to this site, now I need help to improve my theme, if you can help me, did not hesitate for this,

please see my style selector on right side. also i want your ideas about my first or second “custom change” as an main style

http://themes.massoudjoveini.com/unique/

sincerely thanks

Never give up

@dmsumon
thanks for reply, you gave me hope.
- really I use 3 font, arial for body, lora for heading (italic for portfolio) and oswald for menu.

@ASteam
thanks for reply, I consider your suggestions.

thank to all,
I try for Improvement and consider your opinion, I hope this theme approve.

PersianArt said
- all shadow are strong? or portfolio and copyright that have dark background?