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Pancha
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Hello. I’ve recently made a new design, but Im not sure if it’s enough to meet these criteria here. I don’t want to submit it billions of time like the last one so I just decided to ask you about your opinion.

Here is the link: http://www.obemania.com/newlay3.jpg

What do you think? what should I fix?

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BroOf
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You could upload your design here to get some more informations.

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kevinsturf
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right now what comes to my mind is shocking. will report back here later with more info

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Pancha
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what do you mean?:)

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Creative32
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Whoa… That is pretty flashy… maybe too flashy… then again, that’s just me (I like matte things :D)

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myTheme
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Nice effects but maybe too flashy as mentioned. In addition typography needs some tweaking, in my opinion.

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