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ominiom says

I’ve been working on a new template, but I’m not sure if it’s up to scratch for Themeforest. You can see the homepage here . Any advice, comments and criticism is greatly appreciated! Many thanks

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segen says

Hi omniniom, you have a nice start. I would suggest You to put the portfolio slider (need more work) on another page and leave just the footer. Footer links should be smaller. Work a bit on your typo and “more” buttons should be without the stripe pattern. Same goes for the “Who are we?” box.

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ominiom says

Homepage has been updated

Portfolio Slider page is here

I changed the header font, took out the stripes and improved the footer and portfolio.

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segen says

Portfolio is looking much much better now. You still have some alignment issues on both pages so try to align things better.

This article wouldn’t hurt you to read: http://blog.themeforest.net/tutorials/common-mistakes-in-web-design/

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ominiom says

Wow, quick reply! I see what you mean about the alignment – I can see it now in the footer and navigation – is there anywhere else it can be seen?

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kevinsturf says

hey nicely coming along but I would suggest something better with the navigation. It looks like ugh…idk. that’s what comes to mind when I see it.

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shadow66142000 says

I’m not a fan of the menu but the big problem is everything in the top section blends together…meaning there isn’t enough separation. You also have some alignment issues.

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ominiom says

Hi, I recently restarted work on this theme and made some updates

You can see:

The Homepage

The Portfolio

And the services page

Do you think it is much improved from last time? And what does it need now?

Thanks in advance

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