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aitor72 says

Hello! I just designed a logo and i whant some feedback, any help?

Thanks!

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aitor72 says

No feedback? ;(

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LuisFaus says

Hola Aitor,

If you don’t mind, Ill comment in English so others can understand my constructive criticism.

While its an “ok” logo, for me, it lacks in typography and the graphic element is too simple. You could upgrade the graphic element to say a bit more regarding the actual name that you have added along with it. Perhaps even making it look vintage 50’s / 60’s faded/grunge surf style. Then the typography could get a revamp also to something like Candy font or Digital Surf.

Hope it helps.

:)

PD: Te falta una “s” en tu copyright “rightS”

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aitor72 says

Hola Aitor,

If you don’t mind, Ill comment in English so others can understand my constructive criticism.

While its an “ok” logo, for me, it lacks in typography and the graphic element is too simple. You could upgrade the graphic element to say a bit more regarding the actual name that you have added along with it. Perhaps even making it look vintage 50’s / 60’s faded/grunge surf style. Then the typography could get a revamp also to something like Candy font or Digital Surf.

Hope it helps.

:)

PD: Te falta una “s” en tu copyright “rightS”

Thanks for your feedback! I will improve it and upload here again to see the result :)

PD: Gracias por lo de la “s” todavía no dominio muy bien el ingles.

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LuisFaus says

Na no te preocupes, y si tienes alguna duda de lo que he dicho antes en ingles me dices y lo traduzco sin “google translator” :)

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aitor72 says

Na no te preocupes, y si tienes alguna duda de lo que he dicho antes en ingles me dices y lo traduzco sin “google translator” :)

Por eso no hay problema, lo he entendido perfectamente, Gracias!

He is saying me if i had any problem to understand the english.

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wallfish says

First I’ll say I agree with Luis Faus.

Here’s what I think:
  1. Alignment needs improvement.
  2. Font needs variation.
  3. Add a vertical option.
  4. Detail the sun (unless it’s intended).
  5. Add more elements/exaggerated your design little bit as you are talking about beach and fun.

Hope it helps and good luck with your submission. :)

EDIT: Are you and Luis buddies? Both are from same country so I thought of poking the conversation ;)

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LuisFaus says

First I’ll say I agree with Luis Faus. Here’s what I think:
  1. Alignment needs improvement.
  2. Font needs variation.
  3. Add a vertical option.
  4. Detail the sun (unless it’s intended).
  5. Add more elements/exaggerated your design little bit as you are talking about beach and fun.

Hope it helps and good luck with your submission. :)

EDIT: Are you and Luis buddies? Both are from same country so I thought of poking the conversation ;)

Nope, just met here in GR. He still lives in Spain ,Im guessing. While Im ten thousand plus kilometers away out of Spain.

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aitor72 says


First I’ll say I agree with Luis Faus. Here’s what I think:
  1. Alignment needs improvement.
  2. Font needs variation.
  3. Add a vertical option.
  4. Detail the sun (unless it’s intended).
  5. Add more elements/exaggerated your design little bit as you are talking about beach and fun.

Hope it helps and good luck with your submission. :)

EDIT: Are you and Luis buddies? Both are from same country so I thought of poking the conversation ;)
Nope, just met here in GR. He still lives in Spain ,Im guessing. While Im ten thousand plus kilometers away out of Spain.
He is right! I live in Spain, In a few hours i will upload the logo again to see what people says :)
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UnknownDepths says

I actually think it would be cool if it were a two color logo. Something where the sun’s center is one color and its corona another. This two color combination may work well if it were reproduced in the text. The top being the corona color and the bottom being the sun’s center color? Ideas to play with and test.

Aside from that, I think this logo’s element alignment and placement needs some alteration. Lining up the text to the right of the sun would be really well done if it both upper and lower text fit into an area the exact height of the sun image.

If you keep it all one color, see what adding some gradient might do to it.

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