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graphicmind says

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What do you think should be changed and/or improved?

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graphicmind says

Anyone?

Btw, it’s a retro business card.

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JaneVision says

I like it. I’ve never designed a business card mind you so take that with a pinch of salt. I love the colours and form of the background, i’m not keen on the glow and wide white outline on the text. Maybe try the Graphic Designer text in a rectangle instead? Good luck!

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graphicmind says

^ Okay, thanks!

Anyone else?

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RightStuffDesign says

Hi,

This is my first forum post here.

This is my opinion but I do not like the text overlapping the different background colors. Having said that the back looks good. Like Jane said perhaps get rid of the white under graphic designer.

Try having the orange part bigger and those other colors maybe further in the corner (or 2 corners or all 4 corners?) so they don’t overlap any of the text. Black on orange is good enough and probably doesn’t even need a white stroke around it.

As for the other text, try and keep it in line with the heading, so it doesn’t even go 1mm past the area where the last letter of the heading is (the ’ I design…’ )

That’s what I think.

Just give it another shot with that in mind.

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graphicmind says

^ Very helpful, thanks!

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simonswiss says

the background and the retro style are looking very good – i like that.

There is something wrong about the “stroke” on your texts – it’s too obvious and in-your-face.

Good luck – don’t give up with this item, it’s pretty good!

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