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djjeep says

Hi. My new business card rejected…need feedback….

Thanks for Your help…

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Norseland says

I would try working some more color into the designs.

A full flat color of black/yellow does not seem very inviting.

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djjeep says

Ok. Tnx. I will try ;)

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JeromeCollinge says

Ok. Tnx. I will try ;)

If your going to try working more colours into the design maybe try black & yellow together, those colours usually look nice with each other, good luck.

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anchor_point_heshan says

It seems great looking to me….. but I think the font size is a bit larger which kills the proximity of the general design, and in the yellow color thing the text is not clear. and yes of course use black with yellow….. :) Im not a pro these are my opinions only…... :):) hope this helped

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thomask3r says

I agree with anchor_point_heshan. The information text is a little big. Even though I think it works out in this design, it might be the reason for rejection :)

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djjeep says

Very appreciate your words, guys! ;) Good luck to all! 8)

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