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kriskorn says

Hello!

As you all know Themeforest is having right now a Tumblr Theme contest. I tried my hand first time on a Tumblr theme and got rejected as I imagined it would go. I would be very happy if anyone has some guidelines how to improve the theme, especially from veteran Tumblr themers.

Here is the link – Baroness

Thank you very much!
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mikedidthis says

Hello!

Not a veteran, but here are my thoughts.

Background: Lack of contrast between the posts background and the page background. Using #f0f0f0 improves it: http://i.imgur.com/OVBBm.png

Post types: Great you have all the post types in, add support for Ask / Submit

Social Links: Again, great you have the twitter feed in there, but some social icons or links would be handy.

General: There are a few themes already like yours in the Tumblr category: http://themeforest.net/item/ultramnml-clean-responsive-tumblr-theme/2969518 & http://themeforest.net/item/simplicitheme-blog-template-for-tumblr/1939226. Both are great examples of doing a theme correctly.

The thing that sets these apart from your own, is they are responsive, and include a few more features. Personally I would try and take the theme in a slightly different direction to make it stand out, and look at making it responsive.

Hope that helps.

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kriskorn says

Mike your themes are really great. Thank you for you thorough feedback, value it very much. You should definitely make something for the contest if you have time.

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mikedidthis says

Thanks, but they are no big thing.

The key is to keep going, and look at taking what you have to the next level :)

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