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HDesign85 says

Hi peeps,

Im now working on this flyer.. will it get approved..?

http://hdesign.nu/foto/rosesflyer.jpg

Thanks,

Sam

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shahafyakov says

I really don’t know because i’m new to graphicriver but I gotta tell you this looks like one big mess…
i would of remove some of the stuff in the middle or just re-arrange everything there

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NewEntryDesign says

This Flyer is too complex with to many elements. Also general title not look so good. Make the title with some special font selection. The typography also need a lot of work.I hope so that i help you. ;)

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unlockedart says

I have to agree with the rest that it is just to messy in the middle to cluttered. I like the general idea of this flyer it just needs to be a bit more simple.

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crisjeo says

I agree with the previous posts. I think you have to make more clearly the elements of your project.The typography needs more work, especially the “party” text. Also, the date text needs to be bigger and i think you have to consider its position in your flyer.

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HDesign85 says

Thanks all for your feedback!!

I have made some changes.. is this better now..?

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crisjeo says

I think you should put the bottle element in the ground which seems to be the clouds in that case. Maybe make it smaller just a bit. Also, i think you should focus on the typography. In position of date text you can add, as example, ” Your club presents” because the viewer wants to know wh?ch club organises the party. The date text could go above the text “music performed by” and the “luxury party” more in the middle but not exactly in the middle of the flyer. In additional, give a try in other better fonts than these and rotate just a bit the “party” word from the part of y. I think that it will match better with the “luxury” word. This is my opinion, i hope it was helpful! :)

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