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Itachicz says

Hi everyone,

could you please give me some feedback on my WP theme thx :)

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FinalDestiny says

Way too generic and simple, anyone can do something like that with Bootstrap. You’ll need to come up with some of your own ideas if you want to be accepted here, anyone can create columns, add some text and a few images

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CodeSwift says

I’m not a designer but here are some suggestions.

Logo

Work a bit on the logo, it can make a big difference.

Navigation

I like the navigation, but the subnav needs a bit of work. Remove the shadow and make the font size smaller.

Slider

Add more top and bottom padding on the slider. Maybe 50px 0 instead of 20px 0.

The arrows are a bit odd, somehow they don’t fit. But i suggest you remove the arrows and put centered “circle pagination” in there.

Lose the bg pattern, everything else is clean and without any patterns.

Headings

Remove top border, keep the bottom.

Anyway, good luck and don’t give up :)

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Itachicz says

Way too generic and simple, anyone can do something like that with Bootstrap. You’ll need to come up with some of your own ideas if you want to be accepted here, anyone can create columns, add some text and a few images

First thank you for your response :)

So the main problem is design because is too simple right? :)

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Itachicz says

WPScientist

Thank you very much for your suggestions, I will definately lok at them and make improvements :) I Have to admin, I’m not a big designer :D

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dnp_theme says

Aside for the previous reviews, my main problem is content. Your content is more like a mock-up and not polished in any way. Typography is the key element in any kind of publishing.

Here some suggestions:
  • increase the leading, make the headings BLACK, to strike the eye first
  • paragraphs cannot be more than 5 rows, looks in a way that, well not anyone would actually read them
  • micro and macro spacing is completely missing, you can google for some tutorials on this
  • your theme needs to be unique: create your own graphics, icons, typography style

Good luck.

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Itachicz says

Aside for the previous reviews, my main problem is content. Your content is more like a mock-up and not polished in any way. Typography is the key element in any kind of publishing. Here some suggestions:
  • increase the leading, make the headings BLACK, to strike the eye first
  • paragraphs cannot be more than 5 rows, looks in a way that, well not anyone would actually read them
  • micro and macro spacing is completely missing, you can google for some tutorials on this
  • your theme needs to be unique: create your own graphics, icons, typography style
Good luck.

Thank you very much for you advice about the content and typography :) I really appreciate it :)

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YuKhinThemes says

Addition, you should give a fixed height for your main slider. It is uncomfortable if it push content below up/down when I reading.

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christopherjon says
So the main problem is design because is too simple right? :)
The problem isn’t that it’s too simple, the problem is it’s too generic.

There are already hundreds of themes available that have nearly identical looks and features.

I’m not saying it’s bad but I don’t see anything new here.

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Itachicz says

So the main problem is design because is too simple right? :)
The problem isn’t that it’s too simple, the problem is it’s too generic.

There are already hundreds of themes available that have nearly identical looks and features.

I’m not saying it’s bad but I don’t see anything new here.

Thx for your reply :) The problem is that I’m too much focusing on my page builder feature and that’s why I don’t have so much time for design, and I’m lack in it :D

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