Curtain Text / Logo Animation - Preview Feedback

Hi Guys,

I am posting a sample preview of my new project. I have made two versions, one with text and one without text. Didnt add music and sound so you guys can focus on the detail and suggest me improvements.

On the other note, can you tell me how can I get the music file for the project preview from the author. Do I need to personally send them request or I need to use forums for it. I am sure audio masters provide their sound tracks freely as it promotes their work also.

Thanks in advance.

Text and Logo Version: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umPMdQ0pAQY&feature=youtu.be

Logo Only Version: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlIE7CIM0Rk&feature=youtu.be

you can use watermarked audiojungle previews without asking author for permission, as long as you link back to the item’s page.

Yeah but what if I use more than one audio tracks or sound FX, all of them would have watermark sound bite. Thats why I am looking for an original track but just one watermark.

shelf promotion ish not allowed in forumsh, shorry

Self promotion? I need your feedback mate…

cyzer said
shelf promotion ish not allowed in forumsh, shorry

This is not self promotion. Guy just wants a feedback on his project.

I don’t think this project gets approved, I dont see a curtain.
But you can try it with the text and logo version.
You can use sound FX from audiojungle without the watermark if the sound is protected by the music but ask for permission before.