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DappaDesignz says

I need your input guys, on where i went wrong so i can improve my psd template and this time hopefully it will be accepted.

BTW ive spent over 2 and a half months on this design.

Index page – http://img830.imageshack.us/i/02index.jpg/

Services page – http://img243.imageshack.us/i/03services.jpg/

About us page – http://img13.imageshack.us/i/04aboutus.jpg/

Portfollio – http://img148.imageshack.us/i/05portfolio.jpg/

Contact Us – http://img709.imageshack.us/i/06contactus.jpg/

If someone is willing to edit the psd for me and make it better that would also be good thank you^^

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organicbee says

why was it declined and what category are you trying to submit it to? just at a quick glance the typography could use some improvements

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digitalimpact says
why was it declined and what category are you trying to submit it to? just at a quick glance the typography could use some improvements

[...]my psd template[...]

DappaDesignz, I may sound like a broken record, but the PSD category is the HARDEST to get into. Just take a look at the PSDs there to see what I mean…

I’m almost certain your reviewer told you to code it, so if I were you (and I was in your shoes) believe me, code it and forget about the PSD category. You won’t make much money there anyway, since they’re priced low and people prefer coded HTML versions (and even better, a CMS theme).

Sorry for being somewhat negative, that’s just my personal point of view that the PSD category on TF is a waste of time with the lowest ROI of all…

Code it up! :)

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BroOf says

Hey it looks like a good start but there are a few I would suggest you:

  1. Add some more line height to your content
  2. Put the icons to the left side and let the text float around them.
  3. Don’t center the Read More buttons put them on the left or right.
  4. Change the noisy background in the footer with something more clean and light
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duotive says

the psd market is very picky… try to make it a html… that is probably what the reviewer said too, no? my opinion:

the home page remove the gradient from texts… the white is not that visible make the noise a little smaller in the footer

the service page: the heading text is not centered remove the gray line between the

about us: why is the heading so small? is too small… make it like a heading not just another text

portfolio: try to add some grey fade border to the image wrapper it dosen’t look go at the bottom of the page where is white the heading is to small

extra: remove the footer linking white line center the search text from the header area

hope it helps a little, i’m not a designer but i see errors

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DappaDesignz says

Would someone be happy to edit the psd for me? Because i’ve tried alot to edit it. But not feeling happy about what i have done so far.

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duotive says
Would someone be happy to edit the psd for me? Because i’ve tried alot to edit it. But not feeling happy about what i have done so far.

don’t have the time :(

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DappaDesignz says

Can someone else, please lol i want my first ever psd template on sale >_<.

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duotive says

psds don’t sell i could make you a deal with a html theme .. contact in private profile if interested

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DappaDesignz says

Ok ive sent you a message.

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