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Forefall
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Currently this template is only in PSD format. I intend fully on converting it into XHTML /CSS and Wordpress in the near future.

Any comments or critiques are welcome on either review my design or this thread here :)

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Please look at this version when critiquing: http://s2.photobucket.com/albums/y47/detri/newdouzo.png ... I foolishly uploaded the version where I did not color the links :(

Cheers!

Brian

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Ivor
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I like it! Is a gorgeous theme, very clean… code it :D

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ponjoh
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Looks very good! Just a few of things that could be improved:
  • The line with meta info below the post headings is kind of crammed, and it steals the attention from the post content. Reduce the font size and make it sans-serif (serif fonts in small sizes is very hard to read on a monitor) to get a balance between posts heading and content, and increase the margin from the heading.
  • The posts content is quite hard to read, and it will be even harder when it’s rendered in the browser. Increase the font size a bit (the post content should be more prominent than the post meta)

Check out http://www.webdesignerwall.com/tutorials/typographic-contrast-flow/ for a great article on visual hierarchy.

Other than that, great design! Pleasant colours, nice layout…

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