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Veuse says

I have submitted a Wordpress theme for review, and have been rejected with this argument:

You still need to figure out a better way to display the slider text. It seems not important and not looking good

It seems he does’nt think it gets enough attention on the page. If it looks good or not is a subjective matter, but it it VERY visible in my eyes. What do you guys think?

I would also like some comments on the general design/layout. All comments appreciated.

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TimeNomad says

Overall, I like your theme, but I agree with the reviewer, if I were you I’d lower the opacity of the slider text’s background so it would blend more with the image itself & position it in a fixed position, say, above the logo.

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webinpixels says

nice theme :) but i’m agree with the reviewer too.. maybe make the text container more wider or equal with images width will be better.. ;)

sorry for my english,

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VisualSharing says

I’d make the body text at all to be 12px. I agree with the reviewer, I barely noticed the slider text even though I was looking for it. :)

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Veuse says

Ok guys. Thanks for all comments. I have made significant changes to the theme now, and resubmittet. Fingers crossed.

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ATLChris says

I like it better now, but the content box over the images is to big, is covers to much of the image. Other than that, I think it is a very nice theme.

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