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mitdralla says

I wanted to try and submit my idea for a facebook app… I submitted it and it got rejected. I know it visually looks very different, but I think that is OK! It’s for a facebook application 810px wide.

Is it really a bad template? Do you think it’s worth me trying to fix? I really like the design aesthetic so If its not a right fit for TF I dont want to change it to much.

Please let me know your feedback. I have multiple pages, but Ill preview a few..

Thank you, Tim

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RafalBorowski says

As for me there is too much grey on grey and way… WAY too much stripes. Make it less “stripe’y” and more colorful (or less grey’ish) and try to resubmit then.

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tinyamasisurum0 says

i would take only one color and deny others and add more white color and only one background image

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mitdralla says

Thanks for the feedback guys, appreciate it.

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zeedesign says

Hello, Too much uppercase and large font try to make it minimal and make text icons and box more small. Use some decent color and it’s looking like u not used pattern on boxes but u added that stripes as your watermark. make boxes with light gradient and add colorful stripes in top or bottom of box. and make full box light. there is some more improvements needed and concept is good.

Thanks

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pjtops says

Hi,

The stripes are a bit distracting, making it hard too read the text. Try toning them down/more transparency and see if that works.

goodluck

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mitdralla says

Thanks guys! Appreciate it!

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