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PixelsInColors
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Hey!

I’m looking for feedback for my template what I made recently SystemS

what do you thing? it can be approved in this category marketing->landing pages->technology->apps

Thanks for you time and feedback. :)

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charlie4282
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With respect I do not feel that this is ready for TF. The design looks outdated, nothing unique about it and you have some problems with basic design principals including alignment and spacing issues. Logo needs to be remade and a few other bits and pieces including the validation.
B<r>It is a good start but the design needs polishing and the code checking.

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