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Rocket-Design says

Hello,

I started working on the first template for themeforest.

I finished today the first model home page. This is the link : http://gurubusiness.ro/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/bootstrap3-1170-30gutter1.jpg

Give me feedback. Looks Good? Odds to accept?

Thanks.

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FinalDestiny says

I don’t like it, sorry.

This is not clean OR attractive http://prntscr.com/2dm2xj

the typography here is bad http://prntscr.com/2dm30d

this is a disaster http://prntscr.com/2dm331

and overall your template brings absolutely nothing new to “the table”, it has all the same pages any other one page has, but a few levels below their quality. Either you bring something new or you use the same elements, but make the design really perfect.

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Jthemes says

Colors are dull, header is common. fonts used are not looking good. Probably try to work from scratch instead of working on this

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GraphiTivity says

Yes i agree with FinalDestiny…

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