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chuck8
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Hi, I’m making a new Landing page template.

Here is a part of it: http://forrst.com/posts/App_Vision_WIP_feedback_needed-2bJ

Can you guys give me some critiques, suggestions? Thanks!

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2Fwebd
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Hi Chuck8 ! First, I don’t see the footer :p, then, social icons become essential, add them ;) Menu need improvements (text shadow, active link…). In the “app features”, replace the number by some icons (better I think) :)
Hope it’ll help you. Regards

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chuck8
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Hep doubleF, Sorry, I forgot to mention that it’s an early version and the footer is not yet done! Thanks for the others feedback, it helps!

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chuck8
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Yep, 2nd shot here: http://forrst.com/posts/App_Vision_WIP_2nd-2Zu

Since last time: - Replaced numbers by icons in the App Features section - Added a subtle shadow on the navigation text - Added following sections: Preview, Testimonials, About Us, Subscribe, Contact.

I’m not sure about the contact form. Is there to much margins? I tried to stick with 40px everywhere but here, I don’t really feel it. Feedback wanted!

Thanks, Chuck

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chuck8
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Anybody here?

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chuck8
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If an admin could move this post to the “Themeforest” section, it would be great :)

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asifnm7
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Overall it is very nice, just the bright green buttons are too much, the rest of the design uses subtle colours, perhaps a nice white button will stand out more. Nice background as well.

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aves01
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I recommend resizing the header to a bigger size.. good luck it’s marvelous

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Joost
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If an admin could move this post to the “Themeforest” section, it would be great :)

Done :) Please refrain from posts like ‘Anybody here?’ though ;)

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If an admin could move this post to the “Themeforest” section, it would be great :)
Done :) Please refrain from posts like ‘Anybody here?’ though ;)

Yep, sorry. Thanks :)

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