Hi, I’m making a new Landing page template.
Here is a part of it: http://forrst.com/posts/App_Vision_WIP_feedback_needed-2bJ
Can you guys give me some critiques, suggestions? Thanks!
Hi Chuck8 !
First, I don’t see the footer , then, social icons become essential, add them Menu need improvements (text shadow, active link…). In the “app features”, replace the number by some icons (better I think)
Hope it’ll help you. Regards
Hep doubleF, Sorry, I forgot to mention that it’s an early version and the footer is not yet done! Thanks for the others feedback, it helps!
Since last time: - Replaced numbers by icons in the App Features section - Added a subtle shadow on the navigation text - Added following sections: Preview, Testimonials, About Us, Subscribe, Contact.
I’m not sure about the contact form. Is there to much margins? I tried to stick with 40px everywhere but here, I don’t really feel it. Feedback wanted!
If an admin could move this post to the “Themeforest” section, it would be great
Overall it is very nice, just the bright green buttons are too much, the rest of the design uses subtle colours, perhaps a nice white button will stand out more. Nice background as well.
I recommend resizing the header to a bigger size.. good luck it’s marvelous
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