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zenhop says

Hi,

I’d like to get honest feedback on a design: http://demo.fbress.com/template/mybusiness/index.html

I followed the instructions on font size, alignment, etc.

Thanks!

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kops says

hi :)

The Homepage lacks focus – my eye goes all over the place and never really focuses on any single article, image or page element.

Ubuntu Condensed doesn’t work for me as a body text font, especially at that size,

Visually, it looks a little drab – can you increase the contrast a little, add a splash of colour somewher? some texture?

J

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