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FamousThemes says

Hello,

I am working on the second version of “My mobile page” template, and needed some feedback from the community :)

I am intersted more in:

1. How to improve the Headers typographic elements

2. Padding and spacing of elements from layout

3. Buttons design and gradients

And of course feedback on other things that you will find wrong on this version.

IPHONE SIZE PREVIEW

FLUID LAYOUT PREVIEW

Thank you.

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Flatlylab says

In the Portofolio page you use text-align: justify, and creates space gaps between the words, try to stick with left and right aligment…And also the “navigation” try adding a small title next to the tumbnails, or above, or somewhere..because from my point of view they don’t seem to descriptive…is a little bit confusing..Is more like an application menu rather than a website menu..

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Flatlylab says

Now i notice that you use justify alignment on almost every page.. Read this http://blog.themeforest.net/resources/10-typography-tips-for-web-designers/</a

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FamousThemes says

Thanks for the link Hamzy, it will definitely help me :)

I will consider also changing the icons menu on home page. I have a better ideea for that.

Regards.

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