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libertux says

Hi evry body :) I need some feedback about our new design, specially if it’s on TF restrictions.
URL : http://postimage.org/image/bsnnmos1l/
THKS

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2Fwebd says
Hi libertux ! Sorry but your design is not yet ready…Why ? Please compare it with the current library (http://themeforest.net/popular_item/by_category?category=site-templates). You have lot of basic problem:
  • The main issue is the spacing
  • Social icons are too big
  • Menu looks old
  • The elements looks outdated…
  • Typography need improvements too
So, you have to learn more about the basics and see what do the success of an item (get ideas across and make your mix ;) ). Try to be unique too :).
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,
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libertux says

THKS for your advices, i’m a new designer that’s why i have basic errors and that why I need help ;)

So, i try to do some changes according to () advices so what do you think about this result : http://postimage.org/image/rvuiuteq1/

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2Fwebd says

Better but not yet enough… :p Take the time ! Observe the best sellers :). You have always some basic problems -> Button submit in “quick contact” isn’t readable (white on light grey doesn’t work). You have to play with the shadows too…So take your time ;)

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libertux says

HI,
Thank you F² for your precious advices :)
I make some changes to my template and feedback still needed.
URL : http://postimage.org/image/6luded63z/
Thank you,

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libertux says

Hi every body (F²) :)
After some changes based on previous advices i have this result : http://postimage.org/image/pm8431yjz/
So what do you think about that.
Merci F² pour vos précieuses conseilles ;).
Thank you.

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libertux says

Hi every body (F²)
I’m sorry if I post many versions of the design, but i’m working hard thease days :)
So this is my last version after many upgrades : http://postimage.org/image/oco2t88xb/
Can you please tel me what do you think about this design?
Thank you,

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2Fwebd says
Hi ! You are motivated ! :P So take time ;) But it’s better
  • Social icons are too small :p
  • “Go to the top” button looks outdated
  • Use just 2 or 3 colors not more
  • Color of the heading “Random posts” and “quick contact” is very weird (replace it)
  • Too much different backgrounds (footer, recent posts, popular posts, ads, menu) Play it with harmony ;)
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libertux says

Hi,
Yes F² i’m so motivated :D
So what about thease improvements : http://postimage.org/image/g5wl8kca7/
i hope have more feeds to learn more from experiment designer my goal is not to sell (for the moment) but i like to have more feeds to increase my design level ;)
Thank you,

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