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ThemeScience says

Hello Folks, We have made an Under Construction Page, and wanna get some feedback before we submit it.

http://codempire.net/themeforest/UnderConstruction1/index.php

We have about 10 colors , and a color switcher going into it.

Do You think it will get accepted here?

If not , then why?

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squaredWeb says

Hello codempire,

this is my personal opinion, so please dont take any offense from it.

I dont think that it would be accepted in the current state. The graphics could use more work, the typography a little more effort, the bottom part looks too cramped and a bit boring and there are some margin/padding glitches.

Also i am pretty sure that the reviewers would want it to be more unique.

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ThemeScience says

Hello codempire,

this is my personal opinion, so please dont take any offense from it.

I dont think that it would be accepted in the current state. The graphics could use more work, the typography a little more effort, the bottom part looks too cramped and a bit boring and there are some margin/padding glitches.

Also i am pretty sure that the reviewers would want it to be more unique.

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Hello SquaredWeb,

No offense taken,

What Graphics Specifically Need more work? What Typography Needs work? And how is this not unique enough?

If You could answer those questions I would love to hear! Please,and Thanks

CE

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LoveThemes says

The design is basic to say the least. Try using some font replacement on the heading and the countdown.

The Twitter feed and the RSS is too squashed up as is the subscribe section.

Scott

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ThemeScience1 says

The design is basic to say the least. Try using some font replacement on the heading and the countdown.

The Twitter feed and the RSS is too squashed up as is the subscribe section.

Scott

Good suggestions

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ThemeScience says

The design is basic to say the least. Try using some font replacement on the heading and the countdown.

The Twitter feed and the RSS is too squashed up as is the subscribe section.

Scott

Thanks Scott, I appreciate your suggestions. Do you think i should do some font replacements for the sections at the bottom as well?

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LoveThemes says


The design is basic to say the least. Try using some font replacement on the heading and the countdown.

The Twitter feed and the RSS is too squashed up as is the subscribe section.

Scott
Thanks Scott, I appreciate your suggestions. Do you think i should do some font replacements for the sections at the bottom as well?

I’d only use font replacement on headings and titles, so Follow on Twitter, Subscribe to RSS yes.

Scott

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ThemeScience says



The design is basic to say the least. Try using some font replacement on the heading and the countdown.

The Twitter feed and the RSS is too squashed up as is the subscribe section.

Scott
Thanks Scott, I appreciate your suggestions. Do you think i should do some font replacements for the sections at the bottom as well?

I’d only use font replacement on headings and titles, so Follow on Twitter, Subscribe to RSS yes.

Scott

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