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GraficAndMedia says

Hey, I done a flyer and want some feed back, can I sumbit that now? Thanks all!

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6102/6353481821_d9fdedd6e8_b.jpg
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quickandeasy moderator says

Needs a lot of work, it looks incredibly rushed.

As I’ve said several times now, spend some time perfecting your work. Don’t just think of potential sales.

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chrisatlemon says

I don’t know about most people, and I only do this in my spare time, but I never spend less than two weeks on an item. So if you post a new one here every day I don’t think you’re putting in the attention to detail that is needed to produce a top quality file on Graphic River.

The first thing you should address is all the blurriness. The entire middle part makes me think I forgot to put on my glasses. Try going for something crisp and clear. Blur is fine when used correctly, but not as the main element on a poster … At least not in the way presented here.

Cheers

Chris

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GraficAndMedia says

Thanks you both for youre feedback. No, im not doing all this things in 1 day. Im on a design orientated school and have done many projects. This are some parts of it, and I worked hard. I am comming here to get usefull feedback, but saying me I just should take time isnt very helpfull to me, because I have done it. Could I just let the heart without the blur, or is it to empty?

Thanks :) and a nice weekend to you all!

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