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fearsomepixels says

Hey guys, I’m looking for some feedback on my template (link), so far I have finished (kinda) home page. please tell me what you think about it. thanks!

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fearsomepixels says

never mind.. asked some of my friends :) if I’ll be struggling, I’ll ask you guys

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brovem says

Hello fearsomepixels!

The link to your template is broken.

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stinklyonion says
brovem said
Hello fearsomepixels! The link to your template is broken.

That is right. It says 404 error found. It is indeed broken.

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fearsomepixels says

hey again guys, I have made few changes on my template (+ fixed link), looking for your feedback :] best regards

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DesignitTonight says

Don’t have time to review, but it won’t get accepted without some improvements. Plus, it’s not unique

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brovem says
fearsomepixels said
hey again guys, I have made few changes on my template (+ fixed link), looking for your feedback :] best regards

So link works now)

What about your template… It’s not bad. I like photos at the end.

Keep working.

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Nitro_Themes says

hey fearsomepixels.

I like the main page but i would work on the menu for sure add some more graphical elements also change the font use a sexier font. As for the slider i would make it full width and have the caption on either bottom left or right of the image.

Also i would use some nice maybe dotted divider lines between different content. The gallery is cool but i would add a lightbox to the gallery.

Also maybe add a twitter reader to the main page or even on the top pull down where the secret info is.

There are a lot of things that you can add like tooltips hover effects and so on i would also make the menu with sub and second level sub menu as well.

Cheers

Lester

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