Feedback on my template

Hey guys, I’m looking for some feedback on my template (link), so far I have finished (kinda) home page. please tell me what you think about it. thanks!

never mind.. asked some of my friends if I’ll be struggling, I’ll ask you guys

Hello fearsomepixels!

The link to your template is broken.

brovem said
Hello fearsomepixels! The link to your template is broken.

That is right. It says 404 error found. It is indeed broken.

hey again guys, I have made few changes on my template (+ fixed link), looking for your feedback :] best regards

Don’t have time to review, but it won’t get accepted without some improvements. Plus, it’s not unique

fearsomepixels said
hey again guys, I have made few changes on my template (+ fixed link), looking for your feedback :] best regards

So link works now)

What about your template… It’s not bad. I like photos at the end.

Keep working.

hey fearsomepixels.

I like the main page but i would work on the menu for sure add some more graphical elements also change the font use a sexier font. As for the slider i would make it full width and have the caption on either bottom left or right of the image.

Also i would use some nice maybe dotted divider lines between different content. The gallery is cool but i would add a lightbox to the gallery.

Also maybe add a twitter reader to the main page or even on the top pull down where the secret info is.

There are a lot of things that you can add like tooltips hover effects and so on i would also make the menu with sub and second level sub menu as well.

Cheers

Lester