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Feedback on new OnePage template

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manuelvega says

Hi guys i am working on a one page template, i need to improve in terms of design, visual hierarchy, typography and how the design is executed. give me some ideas and some feedback it would be much appreciated.

Here the link .

http://s17.postimage.org/wif9jg673/feedback.jpg

Thanks in advance . manuelvega

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manuelvega says

i cant edit my threads :( ..

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iKreativ says

It’s a long way from approval, sorry.

I think you need to study design a little bit more. Color theory, visual hierarchy, vertical rhythm and alignment & spacing.

-Scott

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manuelvega says

It’s a long way from approval, sorry.

I think you need to study design a little bit more. Color theory, visual hierarchy, vertical rhythm and alignment & spacing.

-Scott

thanks i’ll keep it in mind

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