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mrjasmin
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Hi ! What do you think about my new wordpress theme ?


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webdesigndeluxe
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The navigation could be better, and the logo as well. Also try increasing the line height with that extra space you have. Other than that it looks good. Great job.

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mrjasmin
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Here is a updated version. What do you think about it ?

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KY
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Personally, I don’t like how the monitor graphic is staying. Too unrealistic, like it’s flying in the air. Maybe you can decrease the gray header height and put the down part of the monitor on the black area. Recreating the idea of a monitor staying on something else. Also, there is a lot of free space between the featured content and the black content and on the right between the same featured content and the monitor shape.

Otherwise, good work!

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contempoinc
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I’m sorry, just being hones but It looks a little overly inspired by Onur’s Portfolious WP theme, in a bad way.

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webdesigndeluxe
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Much better updated logo. I think it still needs more work though. Pay attention to little details. Good luck!

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ThemeKioken
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Ouch, this one reminds me of me! lol.

@mrjasmin : It’s obvious that you loved Portfolious so much, and you have a good start for your design but you can do better than this.

You want to know where I inspired from for portfolious? http://www.palm.com. Can you see any relevance for the end result? (not very very much I guess =)) They both use the same idea, but they both have different approaches. See?

You must add your own ideas on it too, work more in details, and try delivering something new for the look.

If you follow the right pattern, your design will go way beyond this current one ;)

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Ouch, this one reminds me of me! lol.

@mrjasmin : It’s obvious that you loved Portfolious so much, and you have a good start for your design but you can do better than this.

You want to know where I inspired from for portfolious? http://www.palm.com. Can you see any relevance for the end result? (not very very much I guess =)) They both use the same idea, but they both have different approaches. See?

You must add your own ideas on it too, work more in details, and try delivering something new for the look.

If you follow the right pattern, your design will go way beyond this current one ;)

Yes I was inspired by your theme. I will add new things to make the theme more unique.

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mrjasmin
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Is this better ?

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Saturndesigns
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Is this better ?

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It still needs some more work in my opinion…take a look at how these designers use the top space of the website to define the whole site. i think u need to work on that part the most and as other people have said pay attension to little details

http://themeforest.net/item/modern-business-2/44297

http://themeforest.net/item/business-time/37856

http://themeforest.net/item/bluelight-wordpress-20-portfolio-and-blog/40433

Thanks Mike

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