Feedback on this

I’m creating a video for logo stings category and please give me some feedback on how i can improve this video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-VcFL5yE8g

It’s nice but you need much more to work on reveal. Try to add some fractal background, more lights…

miseld said
It’s nice but you need much more to work on reveal. Try to add some fractal background, more lights…

I really appreciate that YOU are the first one to help…. I really admire your works..and thanks! i’ll make the changes and post an update here.

It’s ok so far so good now add TAGLINE and make more flares, make corporate or cinematic look. Check this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4A_qlH-vfc

miseld said
It’s ok so far so good now add TAGLINE and make more flares, make corporate or cinematic look. Check this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4A_qlH-vfc

Thanks! will do that…and wow! It got so many sales!!

Maybe make the reveal a bit more interesting, it now basicly fades in. And make it a little faster, 18 seconds for a logo reveal is a bit long

Here is the latest one!

Much better! Now if you make the logo bigger so you can see the reveal in more detail I think you are there