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Flinzar
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I’m creating a video for logo stings category and please give me some feedback on how i can improve this video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-VcFL5yE8g

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It’s nice but you need much more to work on reveal. Try to add some fractal background, more lights…

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miseld said
It’s nice but you need much more to work on reveal. Try to add some fractal background, more lights…

I really appreciate that YOU are the first one to help…. :) I really admire your works..and thanks! i’ll make the changes and post an update here.

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It’s ok so far so good :) now add TAGLINE and make more flares, make corporate or cinematic look. Check this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4A_qlH-vfc

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miseld said
It’s ok so far so good :) now add TAGLINE and make more flares, make corporate or cinematic look. Check this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4A_qlH-vfc

Thanks! will do that…and wow! It got so many sales!! :D

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Maybe make the reveal a bit more interesting, it now basicly fades in. And make it a little faster, 18 seconds for a logo reveal is a bit long :)

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Much better! Now if you make the logo bigger so you can see the reveal in more detail I think you are there :)

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