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dansjostedt says

So I’ve made a new design which is very basic but I want to know what to improve so that when I go on for a more serious project I won’t fail to hard! =)

Anything thoughts are good I guess

For bigger preivew: http://dansjostedt.deviantart.com/art/FREEBIE-BLUTH-Photoshop-Template-394525325

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Dzinc says

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SpaghettiThemes says

i think, you need of more element, gallery grid, price table, some area text (similar single blog post)

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pixel-industry says

Coolo idea, but agree with SpaghettiThemes, need more elements. Also that dashes on about us section are a bit too much.. I would also consider changing typography for the headings..

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dansjostedt says

Thank you for the feedback, I’ll try to add some of the things you just wrote =)

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dansjostedt says

Coolo idea, but agree with SpaghettiThemes, need more elements. Also that dashes on about us section are a bit too much.. I would also consider changing typography for the headings..

Any suggestions for the chage of types?

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