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Your file has some well done design concepts, however it does not meet the current and very stringent quality guidelines and we can not accept your file at this time. To understand the quality of the files accepted to the GraphicRiver library, see the Popular Files list: http://graphicriver.net/page/top_sellers . If you would like feedback from your peers on improving your file, please visit the Item Discussion forum.

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xstortionist said
I like the inverse selection, but the color version is lacking more detail.

So what you recommend? maybe some glass highlights on?

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I like it! I think it’s smart.

The latest version in black-and-white reminds me of the iPhone4 … hmmm, but then again, you can’t do colours in black-and-white :)

I’m not too sure about the gradient on each colour bar. Shouldn’t those be just solid colours if it’s a colour sampler?

Those are just a couple of things off the top of my head. Not to be taken as expert input!

Cheers

Chris

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chrisatlemon said
I like it! I think it’s smart.

The latest version in black-and-white reminds me of the iPhone4 … hmmm, but then again, you can’t do colours in black-and-white :)

I’m not too sure about the gradient on each colour bar. Shouldn’t those be just solid colours if it’s a colour sampler?

Those are just a couple of things off the top of my head. Not to be taken as expert input!

Cheers

Chris

They are just solid colors, maybe you are confused with the glossy there, maybe i should remove it… i’ll do it and post it.

Thanks for your feedback, and if you wish, you speak me in spanish cause i’m from spain too.

See you.

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Hola :)

Yeah, that’s what I meant, the gradient on top of the solid colour which is supposed to be the reflection. Maybe a reflection of the entire slip, but not each colour bar individually?

In any case, it may just bother me, but that’s just personal, could be fine for everyone else :)

Let’s keep it in English so that everyone else can also follow the conversation.

Pero encantado de todos modos ;)

Chris

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Without the glossy:

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I think it is necessary to change fonts and locations. (not harmony now)) (it is my subjective opinion…)

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okay, my thoughts, by no means to be taken as professional advice :)

1) I definitely like it better without the gloss, it’s clearer, more direct and more punchy 2) I think the alignment of the three sample strips is to geometric, to a static. There are no dynamics. In that respect the first version was better 3) I do like the font, but it doesn’t really wow me either.

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thomask3r
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I think yous should go from light to dark on the black/white versions too, if that’s possible:)

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