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Flinzar says

This is my second update, and what do you guys think? any more improvements? and can u please suggest me on an AudioJungle music?

http://youtu.be/uOM0zRKkHBQ
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Generator says

It’s not looking bad.

Would you use it for your logo reveal? On your website, tv?

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Flinzar says

It’s not looking bad. Would you use it for your logo reveal? On your website, tv?

It’ll be for sale in here.

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Ilyon says

Feel like a camera behaves unstable in the end of video.

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DsignProductions says

Feels like self promotion?

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Flinzar says

Feels like self promotion?

This category is ‘Item Discussion’, and this isn’t even on sale here. I guess you misunderstand what ‘self promotion’ means. :)

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aegraphics says

Hello, DarkNurbs! Nice start, but i think it will be rejected. Reason – not enought smoothnes camera movements. It looks great, but too flat. I see you use blur plugin (maybe fast or lens blur), it’s bad idea for 3d animation. Use DOF in camera options, it improve overall quality of video, also u need more animation in rotation & scale. IMO :) Sorry for my bad english & have a big sales. Best regards, Anton.

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It’ll be for sale in here.
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