Looks impressive, but knowing that you have rejected, I noticed that you need some sugar in that pause time, seem to lack energy in space. The typography is good, but missing something impressive or shine … It’s just my opinion. It is unfortunate that you rejected by the working time. I understand. See What say fellow …
I think that if you soft the camera movements will look better, because could read better. Add glow for diamonds. Horizontal lines also breaks the reading, I mean, maybe change the music for another more fashion style and animate feeling the mood of the music, because that guitar is better for moto races, boxeo or things harder than fashion. Maybe it will work better. Is my opinion, but we have to take into account that way of designing changes from one country from another.
I am surprised that the two spanish speak English that similar opinion…xD
thanks for your valuable suggestions!!
A agree with all of the above. i also think those diamonds look pasted and fake . if you could try changing the hue …making them more into the pink .it might fuse better with the project. the ” flame ” affect around the pics looks misplaced… maybe something more fashion , more in the diamond style. but Hey! Don’t give up you are on the right track