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alamshahi says

Hello everyone,

My first item is soft rejected with following reasons:

Reason: 1. Your file has some well done design concepts, however it does not meet the current and very stringent quality guidelines and we can not accept your file at this time. You will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography, graphics and spacing. 2. There are a few inconsistent spacing issues throughout the design. 3. Overall template’s typography needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for sale. 4. Even with the current design, a significant increase in the polish of the various aspects of the template may just swing the decision in your favor.

So, I have made some changes, please kindly have a look at it and help me with your reviews. Does it have any chance?

Edited Version

Soft Rejected Version

Your feedback is highly appreciated. thanks.

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wpmags says

i don’t think they will be accepting this too.

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ucarwebnet says

Soft Rejected Version

health into the hands of a very nice template

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alamshahi says

@ wpmags

Thanks, Well, that might happen, but I hope for the best.

@ ucarwebnet

Thanks a million, I got confused, do you like the old version better?

@ Fellow Themeforest members

Please give feedback! I welcome any comments and opinions, even the harsh ones.

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philipe says

In my opinion, the Font used in Slider is an issue…

“Underlining and CAPITAL LETTERS: Words that require extra attention can be underlined or made capital. These features should never be overused as they can be distracting and underlined text is often confused with links. For important text, these features serve as a good focus.” Source: CoolHomePages

I think you overused capital letters. Besides that, the subtitle is, for me, very similar to description text, what compromises the hierarchy…

That’s my suggestion, anybody agree?

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alamshahi says

@ philipe

Thank you very much for your helpful opinion.

You are right and I agree! that’s why you need fresh eyes to look at your work to find errors! I’ll keep heading and subtitle in capital letters but will change paragraph text to lowercase.

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manuelvega says

more left-right body padding :)

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ucarwebnet says

@ wpmags

Thanks, Well, that might happen, but I hope for the best.

@ ucarwebnet

Thanks a million, I got confused, do you like the old version better?

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Please give feedback! I welcome any comments and opinions, even the harsh ones.

alamshahi teacher matter of taste :D

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alamshahi says

@ manuelvega

Thanks! yes you are right, needs more space. actually it’s the framework’s mistake. will do something about it.

@ ucarwebnet

Yes, there are different tastes, I’m happy that you like the previous version more.

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MegaThemes says

I think your font is not the best choice, the background is too boring flat color, too many colors: cyan, dark blue, yellow, black buttons..white your cyan – black – white – dark blue is not the best. if you use cyan its better with white/grey background, otherwise i would try red button on top of yellow strip—and go from there.

line highet is too small, this font is too bold as well, better thinner font and larger line highet. the learn more buttons needs to be right aligned. font-size inside buttons should be a bit smaller. button execution isn’t pixel perfect. other elements aren’t pixel perfect as well.

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