First item. Try to improve or start over?

Hello. My first work just got rejected. I’am wondering if this have any chance and I should try to improve it or simply start over with new idea? Here’s the picture:

Ejrene

Thanks in advance.

You cannot be serious about the green? It’s really hurting!

I would take the “Latest Works” and the footer layouts and start again with the rest – I do that sort of thing all the time with my regular client work, starting from scratch and looking to the old file as a “what not to do” is a great way to go!

I would say if your PSD didn’t take 5 going on 10hrs of thought and self reworks, question if you’ve done all you can.

But what do I know! I’m new here too, this is just how I roll with my own client work!

Good luck!

I’ve made some major changes to the project. Please take a look:

Ejrene 2

What do you think, is it better? I believe it is. Still, not sure about the headline font, maybe I could’ve found a better looking one. I’am sending it tomorrow. Thanks for your replies!

Now look much better. But all will not be approved because it looks like a free template. And try to use another font for headings

Keep at it, but so far it looks like an inside page vs the homepage at the most! But judging by the improvements from version 1 you are on the right track.

ReaxionGraphics said
Keep at it, but so far it looks like an inside page vs the homepage at the most! But judging by the improvements from version 1 you are on the right track.

Totally agree!

Keep at it