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HDesign85
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This flyer got rejected.. Have someone some advise to make it better..?

http://hdesign.nu/foto/nightparty.jpg

Feedback was: Unfortunately, your submission is too similar to existing item(s) in our marketplace. Your upload must be a unique concept not based on any existing marketplace item.

Any ideas little help! thank you!

Sam

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EliIsakov
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Trust me, I got same reasons on couple of my rejects also, too similar…but oh well.

If it was me, i’d work a bit more on the background, make it look something fancy. Work more on the main title (NIGHT PARTY) make it stand out more, to catch the client’s eyes. Make it shine, add some light effects into it. The top portion of your flyer seems way to empty, try to add some elements into it, or integrated some of the text there also. For example date could be at the top left or right corner inside of a round badge :).

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hawkmax
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Hi, You got a good thing going there but the background and the supporting text is just too flat out bland… Spice it up more.

Work on these two things and you will be good to go also … instead of a full pic try cropping it to just half.

Also browse a few other flyers here on graphicriver for inspiration.

Good luck

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HDesign85
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Thanks for the tips guys!! :)

http://hdesign.nu/foto/nightparty.jpg

Is this better..?

Sam

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Amrhamza
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take away all the brushes, change the background to somthing light colored put only one or two drinks :)

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Graphic-Studio
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Fix that Margarita Glass, the cutout lines on it are to angular.

Everything just seems thrown there randomly.

More Fluid Text and effects.

Overall it’s Dark up top and the common thread is it’s supposed to be a fun party.

The girl is not very enthusiastic and just looks like she is there for a hoo-hum time.

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cagdastakis
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There much more things than margarita glass… Fonts are not related to each other your Layers are not enough quality for graphicriver There are no shadows or reality between layers “Night” text is really need to improve .. i checked your other works and i think you can do this much better

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HDesign85
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Thanks guys!!

I will work on it!!

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NewEntryDesign
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This is good idea but look like 20 % of work is done on it. Take a look the typography on the flyer on the marketplace and also popular authors flyer. You can learn a lot of them.

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unlockedart
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Work on the text, Download some different fonts make it stand out. Add some styles to the fonts, right now the fonts on the bottom just fade into the background.

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