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lou606 says

Hi guys! My flyer has been hard rejected with no reasons given. I thought i was coming up with something new and original, but apparently, i ve made a mistake somehow. Could someone explain ? Here is the flyer

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letsjustdesign says

Try working on the typography and fonts. That maybe the cause of the rejection. The “Swan Ballet” title text looks very stretch.. Also consider changing the bottom fonts.. all the best

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ToivoMedia says

I also think the typography is the main part to improve. I like the text following the shape of the wings though, that’s a nice idea.

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lou606 says

Thank you guys. Toivo, always here when needed ;) Anyway it’s been hard rejected, so even improved, i can’t resubmit it. Is that correct ? I really think it didn’t deserve a hard rejection

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ToivoMedia says

I don’t think it deserved hard rejection. I think with improvement it will be a good flyer. The feathers at the bottom could be better, maybe more of an ornate flourish type thing. Also the ballet shoes could be a bit clearer somehow. I’m sure you could submit it again as long as it’s been significantly changed.

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tmthymllr says

There’s too much going on. Get rid of the swan head and the wings. The ballet shoes and a few feathers should suffice.

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lou606 says

Thanks guys for the advices. I’ll try to improve it in a few days, as i’ m a bit upset with it right now :)

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ToivoMedia says

Yes I do the same thing when I have to go back and improve a project. Best to have a break and come back to it fresh. :)

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Amrhamza says

the background looks nice, just remove everything else crop a professional ballet dancer , swan ballet font is good

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