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thenewage
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I got hard rejection on this Flyer any Ides guys How i Can Improve it ?

My Flyer http://i.imgur.com/lyXIC.jpg

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mihaimcm
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Ohhhh welll change every thing in my opinion ,but first find out what depth means and lights and shadow ,if you can grasp the concept of those word then you will make a good flyer that can be acceptable to use….and fonts .just try looking at the top flyers for inspiration and to grasp a idea of the graphic quality that your works need to have…

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Amrhamza
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it just needs a few alterations in my opinion 1 TAKE OFF THE YELLOW LIGHTS 2 put the main title in the middle and give more space between “it ” and ” on ” cause it reads “iton” and add some gradient style to it 3 add some elements , you can go to www.officialpsds.com but watch out for the copyright materials and good luck

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SanGraphics
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Hey, I think the issue is the bottom part of the flyer. You need to play around with the fonts and colours. I would suggest you use some boxes (like behind the “Free Drinks”) to give more texture to the details! Perhaps you can write the date in a different way like SAT.DEC.25.2012. And also maybe put a Your Entertainment Presents at the top (in a box too) ... you can actually use the “Box” as a main feature! Don’t over do it on every piece of writing though! Oh and make an other colour version … Good Luck

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