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dionamar
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My Flyer was Recently Rejected It was Too Similar To Other Flyers On The Site..

Need Some Critics And Their Opinions to Help Me Improve

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PLEASE HELP & HONEST FEEDBACK

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dionamar
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Nothing???

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dhsign
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Hey Dion,

i’m not the one who should give you critics, but i can give you some ideas :) I would add some beer splashes (or else), some plastic cups, may be a beer pong thing (table, or something else). If you’re looking for something glamorous not a typical teenagers party may be some bottles of champagne (try armand de brignac :) ), some champagne glasses and may be a “cheesy” diamond :) Try with one more color for the typography. Yours is perfect, but may be pink for the word “party” will be nice.

Good luck, mate!

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