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EmilGuseinov says

http://s017.radikal.ru/i424/1111/b7/a5777f20beaf.jpg

I dont understand mby something…

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ThomGeskin says
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revaxarts says

For me the ribbon is far away from acceptable:


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EmilGuseinov says

ok, ribbon is changed, thx!

mby something else?

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EmilGuseinov says
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chrisatlemon says

Honestly, the whole thing looks like copy and paste of various elements to me, but not one flowing design. Somehow it doesn’t feel connected.

Sorry I can’t be more precise, it’s just a feeling I’m having when I see it.

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Amrhamza says
chrisatlemon said
Honestly, the whole thing looks like copy and paste of various elements to me, but not one flowing design. Somehow it doesn’t feel connected.

Sorry I can’t be more precise, it’s just a feeling I’m having when I see it.

Cheers

Chris

AGREE

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EmilGuseinov says

ok chris, how about exampel?

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NeWave says

Thumbs up for the lady with the “attitude” :)

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quickandeasy says

I would spend taking the time to refine all the elements used. It looks as though you’ve very quickly thrown everything together, as @chrisatlemon said.

Also, the font could do with some work. Maybe keep it for the feature text, but the rest – it’s hard to read.

Focus on including detail.

Here’s an example from the this and last week’s top selling Xmas flyers:

Look how crisp all the elements are, look at the detail – there is so much flexibility for the customer, where as right now, yours looks rather bland in comparison.

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