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navigator
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Hi pavle,

I have a few suggestions concerning typography: try to align text in center of pricing tables. Maybe it will look better this way. The same thing you should try with “Customer Testimonials” or put more text in this div. There is a lot of empty space on the right and looks asymmetric…

On tabs your text lines is to long…

“A good line length is one that allows the reader’s eyes to flow from the end of one line to the beginning of the next very easily and naturally.”
- Smashing Magazine

I do not know if this will look good for sure, but you should try. It’s just css adjustments.

Ne odustaj druze ;) (Eng: don’t give up)

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pavle
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Thanks for feedback, mate, and sorry for my late anwer. I won’t give up, but I am really doing my best here and it doesn’t bring any results, it’s still rejected.

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wegrass
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Hi pavle,

Since the pricing table is the most highlight element in you design, I think you should make it more unique by adding some icon, animation.

some inpiration (I like this his work very much) : http://themeforest.net/item/pastel-dashboard-admin-template-iphone-web-app/1694914?WT.ac=weekly_feature&WT.seg_1=weekly_feature&WT.z_author=moveteam

Wish your work will be accepted soon :)

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pavle
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Thanks for feedback, and I think you are right. But I have no idea where to put it, maybe you got something on your mind? :)

Thanks for kind wishes, I am really trying to got that first item approved :)

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