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Smuliii
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I have done many sites just to sell here in TF but I think non of them will not be accepted but now I Maybe got something right. :P

Okay, here it is: Klik I think that it is good start but it need some improvement. And now is your turn. Because TF is full of experts of web design I’m gonna ask you to give me some feedback; what I should add, delete or change.

And probably I’m gonna change that apple’s slider to something little different.

Thanks! :)

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arctic_ark
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looks sweet

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arctic_ark
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So that isnt a flash file? Cuz it looks like a full on flash file….

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dSKY
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very clean, maybe colors are little off….

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Emroni
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Only thing I can think of right now is the green of the buttons. Its too bright to easily read the text inside the buttons. Rest looks pretty cool

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Smuliii
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@arctic_ark – Well I have planned to code it with xhtml/css because I don’t have skills to flash sites. And not programs.. I’m gonna use jQuery to slider.

@dSKY – Yes, hardest part is right now to set right colors.

@Emroni – I can see it just fine, probably with different screen and settings it can look different = hard to read. Well, maybe I can darken those buttons a little bit.

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donchev_a
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It is very nice!
Maybe several things could be touched just to improve the overall look.

1.The top navigation: maybe the active button is green and the rest are brighter than now. If you plan to make this CSS /HTML the anti-alising will not be the same as it is here.

2.Maybe the scroll and the scroll buttons could be in the same green as the logo and the shiny buttons’ green…

3. Content area – use more “white spaces” around the objects there. Maybe now they are too pressed.

4.Increase the brightness of all the text blocks, now the are too dull and difficult to read.

Good luck and many many sells!

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MSFX
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Site looks nice, how long till you upload? :)

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nicolasdelfino
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no man dont change the slider! it both looks good and feels user friendly. we┬┤re neighbours btw (finland / sweden…..) :)

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MarkBrodhuber
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Hello Smuliii,

2 small things.

1. You posted this in the global discussion section. That section is reserved for threads that hold content pertinent across all marketplaces. Your thread is only appropriate for Themeforest.

2. Any talk regarding items for sale here or items one plans to sell here, need to go within the item discussion section.

No worries, its not a biggy, but I figured I’d explain it so you know for future reference.

Thanks, Mark

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