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QwibbleDesigns says

Okay so Jarel rejected my theme a few days ago. I’m fine with that and have emailed him. I’m still waiting for a reply, but that’s fine =)

With such a large community of fine designers, I was wondering if you could comment on what could be improved with my theme? Primarily I didn’t want to really bother you all, but your input would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.qwibbledesigns.co.uk/preview/aurelius/index.html

Any comments are greatly appreciated as always.

Matt

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Pixelworkshop says

Hi, what kind of feedback did you get ?

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DDStudios says
Okay so Jarel rejected my theme a few days ago. I’m fine with that and have emailed him. I’m still waiting for a reply, but that’s fine =)

With such a large community of fine designers, I was wondering if you could comment on what could be improved with my theme? Primarily I didn’t want to really bother you all, but your input would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.qwibbledesigns.co.uk/preview/aurelius/index.html

Any comments are greatly appreciated as always.

Matt

Wrap your content with a solid white or grey BG and make a really nice BG under it and it will be approved.

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DDStudios says

Hum , no .. forget what I said.

Your theme is a mashup of Levitation and Display , from Kriesi.

You should do something original , or not doing anything at all.

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TahaH-Studio says
Hum , no .. forget what I said.

Your theme is a mashup of Levitation and Display , from Kriesi.

You should do something original , or not doing anything at all.

It’s not terribly identical to Levitaion and Display theme. Only the navbar style from display and the slideshow from Levitation. But over all I like it. Also try and get the contact to work. It’s much better to sell a theme with build in contact form.

Good luck ;)

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FRESHFACE says

I personally don’t like Lucida Grande font for big headings, though it’s a wonderful font for body text… Consider Cufon and some nice new font.

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QwibbleDesigns says

Yeah I’ve been playing around locally with cufon, just have found the found to match yet =)

As for Levitation and Display, sure the navbar is similar to display, and the image rotator to levitation, but that doesnt make it a mashup of the two. Plenty other themes use similar navbars and sliders o.0

Contact form does work as far as I tested, I’ll take another look at it =)

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