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Clarissa_86
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Hi All,

I’m trying to get my Muse theme approved, but it keeps getting rejected (twice). I have improved my theme with a Parallax Scroll Video and Picture Gallery. However, I was turned down again today.

Could you please review my Muse theme at http://siteinabagtest2.businesscatalyst.com/index.html

Please gave me your honest feedback and suggestions. I would LOVE to start selling my theme ASAP!!! Thank you ALL for your time :)

Clarissa

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cosmincotor
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Hello, welcome to ThemeForest.

Adding more plugins/features won’t help. You need to improve your design, a lot.

A few of the things you need to look into:

- typography

- spacing

- visual hierarchy

Take care of these first, and try to improve the design.

I hope this helps :)

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Dzinc
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This thread is now in › Item Discussion

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charlie4282
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Sorry it is a way off. You should familiar yourself with top selling design and the attention to detail in them.

- Your logo needs rethinking completely - I do not really get the dividing copy between slides

- Main images look stretched

- Typography across the site needs work

- Massive spacing errors

- Contact now buttons need redesigning

- Footer needs improving

- Services page slider copy is just wrong

- Portfolio items don’t link to anything even lightbox? - Blog again massive spacing and typography needs rethinking

- Sidebar is not really there

- Contact page spacing and alignment

Generally speaking you need to focus on the basics of design first.

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Clarissa_86
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Thank you both for the feedback!!!

This really helps…I will take these into consideration :)

Have a good day or night!

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Clarissa_86
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Hi Guys,

Could you take another look at my site http://siteinabagtest2.businesscatalyst.com/index.html

I revised the design.. Only for desktop. Could please tell me what you think?

Thanks!!

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