Firstly the Highlighted Navigation doesn’t work properly and the design includes very little areas for main content. Secondly, the Design, is not something i like. I think there is a bad color choice and the layout needs to be reworked a little.
It would help if you shared the reviewer comments also.
(P.S: Sorry if i’m sounding harsh, just trying to give constructive criticism to make you a better designer, so don’t take it to heart)
It’s a good start. But it’s not finished in my opinion. The highlighting problem should be solved, which is 30 seconds of work. I think the colors should be reworked a bit, I don’t like the pink on the orange/brown. Furthermore I don’t like the lighteffects, it’s a bit over the top. Maybe try to keep it a bit cleaner? The text on the about page and contact page are not very nice to read. Work more on how you deliver the content on those pages. I also don’t like how I have to scroll to see the footer, When I see the content, I don’t want to scroll.
(P.S: Sorry if i’m sounding harsh, just trying to give constructive criticism to make you a better designer, so don’t take it to heart) – Copyright by burningstonecold
+1 on the color choice. On the “about” page, the content area is too wide. It makes the text hard to read. Plus the line spacing is too tight. The highlight effects need to be more subtle. As it is now, it’s the first thing i notice, which probably isn’t what you want.
+1 on the lighting/glows – looks very sporadic and dominates the focus.Not really a fan of the pink in this case either. Your contact page doesn’t validate and the typography could be improved – ie. the about page is hard to look at with that giant dense block of text, no varying size, and tight leading.
Just some thoughts for improvement…