I think it should work a little harder layers, mounted in a less clean, and movements in and out, also soften more, the concept however, if it is good. Cheer up, you can improve and re-submit!!!
@juanmita I don’t think he can re-submit the item since it was hard rejected. Correct me if I am wrong.
@Dobrescu The movements are just too linear. The upper side of the ribbon element is blurry and dark. Some better looking font would have been better and softer shadows for the texts.
He would have to change the project completely, as I have mentioned.change the quality of animation and finishing layers, and present it as a new project, it really is.