Well… I would say, that effects used at this template are somehow ‘oldschool’. Page title and main heading are really hard to read, underline in navigation doesn’t fit in too much etc. I would suggest you to check some css galleries (google for them) or just browse most selling files at themeforest and try to see what style do people like.
Just my opinion
Look at the templates under the psd category, and than compare them with yours. Your template is “oldschool” and your web elements are not good enough. I would suggest you to look at the other psd templates here on tf.