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ToivoMedia
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Hi guys, I’m working on this flyer design, and I’m at a loss as to how to make the typography look good. Especially the middle section with the headlines is the problem. Can you give me any ideas on how to improve it? Would you bother continuing with this design? Cheers everyone :sunglasses:

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JeromeCollinge
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I would try having the ’’New House’’ and ’’Be amazed’’ text both on the left side together, so move Be amazed to the left so it matches New House and that should give you a better feeling of balance. Maybe also move them upwards a little so that their not touching the white background.

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You might be right about that. I like the house shape of the middle section, but getting the typography to fit is a problem.

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JeromeCollinge
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You might be right about that. I like the house shape of the middle section, but getting the typography to fit is a problem.

Yeah it should just be the job of some re-arranging because the house shape you’ve got now looks cool, just that the text can be better arranged I think, good luck!

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