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bjnet says

Hi, i have designed a theme for my site.

Have a look to it: http://www.moonthemes.com/demo/images/nwmsitef.jpg

Please, i really need your valuable feedback, and opinions etc.

I would really appreciate it.

Many thanks!

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Fynn says

I really like the design. A few things I would change though;

- Make the search bar more visible (perhaps just with a lighter text color)

- Give the text a padding left of a few pixels (compared to the headings and the top borders)

- Change the ‘read more’, ‘posted in’ and ‘posted on’ texts. They are very small and perhaps a bit too plain.

Furthermore, nice job. Like the logo! I’m curious about your other pages.

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duotive says

my opinion.
1. the search needs to be a little more visible
2. make the noise smaller. it’s too high.
3. the footer on the right side, the logo and the menu work for you and your logo and menu. try to make it general. if i have a smaller logo in width and lots of menu items i will break it :)

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campuscodi says

Nice design. It’s more beautiful than some other designs I’ve seen from some people complaining that their theme didn’t get accepted.

You’re on the right track.

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sevenspark Volunteer moderator says

I like the design, but “Don’t worry, shameless self promotion is encouraged”, sounds like it comes directly from Orman’s Premium Pixels. I would recommend rewording that.

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Hein says

I like the design, but “Don’t worry, shameless self promotion is encouraged”, sounds like it comes directly from Orman’s Premium Pixels. I would recommend rewording that.

What glasses are you wearing, looks nothing like Orman’s work.

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ThemeProvince says

@Hein He was referring to the copy not the design.

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sevenspark Volunteer moderator says


I like the design, but “Don’t worry, shameless self promotion is encouraged”, sounds like it comes directly from Orman’s Premium Pixels. I would recommend rewording that.
What glasses are you wearing, looks nothing like Orman’s work.

The glasses that let me read text? :)

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Like Phoenix said, I’m talking about the copy (hence “reword”).

And hey, it’s great copy! Who wouldn’t want to use it – and in a mockup, who cares? I’m merely suggesting that he doesn’t use the same wording as a popular site on his actual site. I take no issue with the design :)

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bjnet says



I like the design, but “Don’t worry, shameless self promotion is encouraged”, sounds like it comes directly from Orman’s Premium Pixels. I would recommend rewording that.
What glasses are you wearing, looks nothing like Orman’s work.

The glasses that let me read text? :)

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Like Phoenix said, I’m talking about the copy (hence “reword”).

And hey, it’s great copy! Who wouldn’t want to use it – and in a mockup, who cares? I’m merely suggesting that he doesn’t use the same wording as a popular site on his actual site. I take no issue with the design :)

Yes i admit, i have copied his text, because i was working on adobe so i needed the work to be done fast, so his site was opened on my browser and i copied his text, just for dummy text, you wont be seeing any Orman’s text on my original live site, LOL .

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bjnet says

I really like the design. A few things I would change though;

- Make the search bar more visible (perhaps just with a lighter text color)

- Give the text a padding left of a few pixels (compared to the headings and the top borders)

- Change the ‘read more’, ‘posted in’ and ‘posted on’ texts. They are very small and perhaps a bit too plain.

Furthermore, nice job. Like the logo! I’m curious about your other pages.

Thanks! nice tips, i will do that.

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