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bjnet says

my opinion.
1. the search needs to be a little more visible
2. make the noise smaller. it’s too high.
3. the footer on the right side, the logo and the menu work for you and your logo and menu. try to make it general. if i have a smaller logo in width and lots of menu items i will break it :)

Thanks! for your opinions, i will consider your tips.

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bjnet says

Nice design. It’s more beautiful than some other designs I’ve seen from some people complaining that their theme didn’t get accepted. You’re on the right track.

Thank you very much for your pleasing comment!

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Hein says



I like the design, but “Don’t worry, shameless self promotion is encouraged”, sounds like it comes directly from Orman’s Premium Pixels. I would recommend rewording that.
What glasses are you wearing, looks nothing like Orman’s work.

The glasses that let me read text? :)

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Like Phoenix said, I’m talking about the copy (hence “reword”).

And hey, it’s great copy! Who wouldn’t want to use it – and in a mockup, who cares? I’m merely suggesting that he doesn’t use the same wording as a popular site on his actual site. I take no issue with the design :)

Oeps, i thought that sentence was meant for the topic starter. Didn’t noticed it in the design, not paying attention to copy in a design when somebody shows it :D

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HisHandiwork says

Yes i admit, i have copied his text, because i was working on adobe so i needed the work to be done fast, so his site was opened on my browser and i copied his text, just for dummy text, you wont be seeing any Orman’s text on my original live site, LOL .

@bjnet I love how you don’t hesitate to admit that you actually did copy it… I highly respect you for that! You’ve got some guts compared to some arrogant authors here on Themeforest. :)

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bjnet says


Yes i admit, i have copied his text, because i was working on adobe so i needed the work to be done fast, so his site was opened on my browser and i copied his text, just for dummy text, you wont be seeing any Orman’s text on my original live site, LOL .
@bjnet I love how you don’t hesitate to admit that you actually did copy it… I highly respect you for that! You’ve got some guts compared to some arrogant authors here on Themeforest. :)

Thanks, LOL ! why i lie if i have done so.

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