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NirvsFX says

I submitted this party flyer, but I want to know if you would accept this. http://www2.picturepush.com/photo/a/12375440/img/Anonymous/PREVIEW.jpg

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LuisFaus says

Looks quite nice. tho, im not entirely sure of the font used for the info, it seems too plain.

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Amrhamza says

they might not accept this model photo, pick something more public oriented, and they might ask you to change the typography layout.

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unlockedart says

Place the text on something that looks more into the photo. The boxes that they are on now just look to placed and not natural. Try and find someway of morphing them into the flyer. The BASS MUSIC PARTY text is awesome!!!

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NirvsFX says

Hey, thanks for the replies, i hope get more:D

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Alexlasek says

It’s good beginning but the composition needs a bit work, flyer should be sharp and not flat. Try to improve background, text colours and change photo.

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